BLOG ENETRY:9 RESEARCH PAPER
My general subject for research paper is Factory Farming and the
issue that I am most interested is safety of the food that we consume. And my
argument will be “Why consuming safe and hygienic food is necessary”. Food
contamination and safety of food we consume is a major concern.
Since deadly virus and life threatening diseases are spreading, it
is necessary that every person knows what they are putting in their body. So
far I have look at the matrix issue http://www.sustainletable.org/274/animal-welfare
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gives a general idea about food safety and the concerns relating to it. It
helps to narrow down the topic.And at the school library website I have looked at public health risk from animal farms. [http://eds.a.ebscohost.com.rpa.laguardia.edu:2048/ehost/pdfviewer/pdfviewer?sid=28a60159-2b29-48d8-8022-581cb4eb3f80%40sessionmgr4005&vid=2&hid=4113]
This a small article on some of the health problems that are generated from eating processed meat.
And from New York Times I read an article on American foot safety no longer improvinghttp://www.nytimes.com/2009/04/10/health/policy/10food.html
My next step would be to organize the materials I read and incorporate it in my writings. Also get rid of excess material and use only what is needed. And still look for some materials.
The difficulty in moving forward is finding appropriate claims and evidence for my topic and getting rid of excess materials.
I'm unable to load your link you have provided. But your topic is very clear, seems you know what you will be focus on. Looking forward to see your reult.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much and i will try to find more sources. About the link i may have copied a wrong website.
Deletevery popular topic to use for your research i think you can find a lot of sources at the library website good luck
ReplyDeleteThank you so much i will look for more sources.
Deletegood choice for the topic. unable to load the website you provided. and your ideas are very clear which seems to give a good result of research. goodluck!
ReplyDeleteThank you and good luck your research paper too.
Deleteyour topic is very good safety of the food but the topic needs to be more in depth. And i was hoping you would also discuss about organic vs non organic food differences and benefits.
ReplyDeleteThat is a great issue topic that you have chosen. I wonder what you find that will set your report apart from other reports that have covered the topic, and how you contribute to the topic with the research that you find. Obviously you have a clear plan on how you plan to tackle your research. Good stuff, good stuff.
ReplyDeletei look forward to reading your paper valid point and interesting topic.
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